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Monday, 21 March 2016
Race Relations day
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cultural day 2016
Thursday, 17 March 2016
writing
We have been learning to write storys
WALT: add descriptive words to my writing.

WALT: add descriptive words to my writing.
Remember to:
- use your senses - what can you hear, see, smell, touch and taste
- add in similes and metaphors
- using feelings
Hi , I am a giraffe. I want to tell you a story about me and a lion. You know lions their always the king of the jungles. But I don’t care because I am tall as tree and as clever as an owl. Okay, now the story begins. One day I was eating grass. I heard a noise from the bushes . I look sharply but I couldn’t see anything. I start eating again than I heard it again. I was scared then I looked so sharply I saw lions tail. I also heard a lion’s voice. Arrrrrrgggg! Arrrrgggg! I couldn't hear so much because of ocean.
Then I realised that it was a lion so I quickly pretended that I am eating. The silly lion was on the stick. I knew he would come but when he came to catch me I bent down so he would fall on the ground and he did so. I laughed at him “ha ha haaa I knew you would come.”
“What! how do you know that I was coming.”
“Well I just knew.”
The end
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writing2016
Poems with Ms whysall
I have been writing poems with Ms Whysall.
children
children
laughing in the freezing water
through chattering teeth
wet clothes and bodies
swimmingGreen is the colour of nature that makes the air clean. Green is the colour of green day we wear green clothes , we bring our lunch without lunch boxes and we water the plant we care of are garden that’s why green day is for garden.
Your Mind is a garden
Your thoughts are the seeds…
You can grow
Flowers,
Or you can grow
weeds...
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writing poems 2016
Thursday, 10 March 2016
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